resonant: Martin Freeman has his doubts (Sneaky John (zrayne))resonant ([personal profile] resonant) wrote,
@ 2005-10-27 10:21 am UTC
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This was supposed to be a smutlet for [livejournal.com profile] z_rayne, in exchange for making this icon for me, but it got a little out of hand.

Thirst
McKay/Sheppard -- 20K -- NC-17
How many minutes would a mouthful of lukewarm water add to Sheppard's lifespan? What would it feel like?

Beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] astolat, [livejournal.com profile] cesperanza, and [livejournal.com profile] terrio.

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[identity profile] honkytonkgirl.livejournal.com
2005-10-27 08:33 pm UTC (link)
The thing that got me was this:

There was a swallow or two left in the canteen. Rodney shook it so Sheppard could hear. "Open your mouth."

Sheppard shook his head mutely.

Rodney reached out and rubbed his thumb over Sheppard's lower lip, and any vestige of doubt he might have had vanished at Sheppard's quick inhalation. "Open, John," he said softly.

This small, significant, gesture totally undoes John and I love it. Thank you!

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[identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
2005-10-28 02:02 am UTC (link)
The "Open, John" was my favorite line, too, so I'm glad it got to you!

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