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resonant ([personal profile] resonant) wrote2008-10-11 08:40 pm
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New Hancock story: Carry

I've posted a new Hancock story to my website. (For the four people on the planet who are interested in Hancock slash and who didn't already beta for me.)

Carry
Hancock(/Mary)/Ray -- NC-17 -- 5,800 words
Mary sends her love.

Beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] celli and [livejournal.com profile] rivkat.
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[identity profile] suaine.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! I really should go to bed but oh! Hancock! Slash! (well, I ship the happy threesome, but slash! :D )
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[personal profile] celli 2008-10-12 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
<3333

[identity profile] wyoluvr.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
want more! more! it's just so lovely and rare.

[identity profile] everysecondtues.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeee. I really should have tried to go back to bed, but I couldn't resist. Just, eeeeeeeeeeeee.

Hancock looked at Ray's head tucked under his chin, his own softened face. "This winds up on the internet, you're gonna face the wrath, woman. Words cannot describe."

"I can take you." There was a smile in her voice.


Was just such a nice, soft ending.

I loved the phone calls, and the text message, and, and *hand flail* everything. This made me super happy.

[identity profile] villeinage.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. And I'm so glad I'm not the only person in the universe who thought this was the slashiest movie.

[identity profile] slvrbld747.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 03:03 am (UTC)(link)

OMG! This was glorious. This is almost exactly how I pictured it after I saw the movie. They would so share him. He was perfect for both of them. I never did quite see the steps that it took to get there but this, this is lovely, and fitting. I could wish for a bit more of the sex, wicked grin, but all in all, wonderful.

I did usually envision them swapping between the coasts, as they ended the movie, between San Fran, and New York. What made you decide to keep Hancock in the Mountains? Proximity? Thanks for sharing this, and if you know of any other Hancock fic along these lines, please, please, share, grins widely, cause it sure was fine. -SB

[identity profile] neotoma.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
hooo. That was *smoking* hot.

[identity profile] norwich36.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
*Flails*

That was absolutely perfect! Really, the ending I totally did not know I was craving. I loved it to pieces.

[identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 09:35 am (UTC)(link)
This was gorgeous, I loved it. And apparently, there's more of us than four!

[identity profile] swanswan.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
That was lovely! Complicated and then beautifully resolved(ish). I like very much how you work with the relationships the film sets up and how you take them to another level. Great story!
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[personal profile] aurora 2008-10-12 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
This was fantastic!

[identity profile] bentrumors.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my, I enjoyed that a great deal. I particularly liked the view from inside Hancock's head. And Ray! *snuggles them both*

I want that picture too! LOL

[identity profile] azephirin.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so lovely and complicated and bittersweet. I loved the details like Aaron's text message, and Mary's experiments with preventing earthquakes. I'm so glad to see more fic for this movie!

[identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
0h my god, that was hot and awesome and the best possible outcome.
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[personal profile] silentflux 2008-10-12 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
That was absolutely beautiful :)

[identity profile] shinra-lackey.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my. I just send you general *squee* and happiness for this fic. Thank you!

[identity profile] shinetheway.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
[bounces with joy]

I have been haunting your journal and website since august 8 when you posted that you were writing a new Hancock story and I'm all wheee!!!!!!

And the story was so totally of the rock, I'm all giddy and happy now.

Please, write more in this fandom that doesn't exist, or I may be forced to do it as well. And I haven't seen the movie yet!

[identity profile] mildmannered.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
Ok, you know what, this was so good it made me see the movie.

And now I have a frackin' essay to write, because Ray? is Hancock's magical Negro (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magical_Negro). God I love this movie, skating on the edge of so much bad race politics and then neatly subverting them.

Thanks for making me see it...

[identity profile] terribilita.livejournal.com 2008-10-24 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
I must admit, I'm a bit conflicted about this fic. It's wonderfully written, as usual, and I very much agree with you that this could be the natural progression following the movie. I distinctly remember thinking how weird it was that Ray seemed A-OK with Mary being in love with Hancock and how much that bothered me. So at the same time, I didn't like Mary very much in the movie and I don't like her very much here. I kind of think it has to do with my kinda-sorta threesome squick and how she pushes for it in the fic. I don't know, I just feel bad for Ray, even at the end. So I feel like maybe I'm missing the point of the fic? *hands*

I debated with myself about commenting because I don't want to sound too forward (and please screen or delete if that's the case) or like I didn't like this. I really did enjoy reading it and it made me a bit thinky; thank you for writing it.

[identity profile] nakedbee.livejournal.com 2008-10-28 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Fabulous! I've had this story open in a tab for a little while and finally got a chance to read it today. It was awesome (like everything you write) and has totally brightened my day. I particularly like that you have them using technology to overcome their proximity restrictions (i.e., the picture sending). I'm having a fun time imagining some near-future time when they invest in a webcam or video phone. ;)

[identity profile] celestialcuming.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
Just read it and just LOVED it!!

[identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com 2008-11-08 08:23 am (UTC)(link)
I love this A LOT.

[identity profile] harmonyangel.livejournal.com 2008-11-23 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is wonderful. I was pointed in this direction by MByrd (who said to mention she knows she owes you an e-mail), and I'm very, very glad I was. This was exactly what I was craving the moment I left the theater, and it very much fulfilled that need. (I requested Hancock OT3 fic for Yuletide, which is how MByrd found me. The powers of Yuletide stretch far!)

Fabulous characterizations, fabulous prose, and an overall fabulous story. I'm so glad this exists!

[identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com 2008-12-21 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
And I rec'd this one here:
http://raveninthewind.livejournal.com/891755.html

[identity profile] matty-parkman.livejournal.com 2009-03-31 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know if I should love you for writing Hancock slash or hate you for giving me briken!Hancock each damn time.
you're too good, and your fics are too real and believable and it hurts. *wails*