You know, I noted "double-splayed," but I didn't list it because I couldn't figure out what it meant. I just couldn't picture it.

Groin-vaulting sounds amusingly athletic, doesn't it? Like an entry in some deeply twisted Olympics.

your fic! ARGH! Mea very culpa indeed.

Don't worry -- I literally e-mailed it to you, waited half an hour, and went, "No, no, I can't wait, I gotta post this now!" But definitely let me know if you find anything that needs changing.

Transfigurations is the one that's going to need serious beta-age, and it actually seems to be getting less finished and not more so as time goes by.