Oh, man, this is lovely. The list format, of course, which I'm starting to suspect is one of my secret kinks or something. And the way the story goes from poignant and painful (all that living flesh, it almost seems obscene) to brain-meltingly hot, and then for a bonus does both of them at the same time. In 500 words. Wow.
(Man, I've missed your expression of these two. I am so happy now!)
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Oh, man, this is lovely. The list format, of course, which I'm starting to suspect is one of my secret kinks or something. And the way the story goes from poignant and painful (all that living flesh, it almost seems obscene) to brain-meltingly hot, and then for a bonus does both of them at the same time. In 500 words. Wow.
(Man, I've missed your expression of these two. I am so happy now!)