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Three new HP smutlets

Wrote one of these at the allergist and the other two while waiting for my daughter to finish her ballet class (which is the sort of thing that makes me feel I'm living a thrilling double life).

Surviving for

teneagles, who asked for "postwar Harry/Ron schmorn." (And isn't 'schmorn' just a delicious word?)

Tidal for

lada_hitam, who asked for Harry/Snape, though it may not be the sort of Harry/Snape she likes.

Plummet for

maryavatar, who asked for Harry/Snape, "plummet." (Her challenge was just too good not to use it for a title.)

Got a doctor's appointment tomorrow and a ballet class every week, so I'm still welcoming challenges for these!

Edited to add the usual: If you want to see links to all the smutlets on one page, go to the story notes here.

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Oh, I really enjoyed the Harry/Ron very much.

(And for challenges -- Fraser/Kowalski, "expected", or Harry/Ron/Hermione, "puzzle.")

Thanks!

Mm -- both good thoughts. Will have fun working on those.

I'd completely forotten about that. Thank you. It even has bottom!Snape, my very favourite Snarry flavour.

Good! Glad you liked it. It was an unusually nice challenge, and I've known for some time what I was going to do with it, but it took me this long to get around to writing it.

Oh, guh. 'schmorn' is definitely a delicious word. :D

My favorite kind of slash, actually.

Oh I absolutely adored the Harry/Ron to pieces! I am never disappointed when I click on one of your links; everything is always so beautiful in tone and pace and it always, always hits the spot.

As for a challenge...Harry/Ron/Hermione - teaching an old dog(s) new tricks.

huh. Interesting. I'll try it.

And thanks so much for your kind words!

Hmm. RayK/Fraser: Disobedience.

*g*

Yum! Will work on this one first!

Challenge: fandom needs more small-cock!Harry, please :o)
(because small-cock!Harry is canon - quote Rowling: "I see Harry as someone who has great skin. That's the one thing he's got going for him" :oP )

Surviving
Loved this - but what's not to love in Best!Friend Harry/Ron? Particularly was moved by this line: where a son died and an orphan was born - beautiful. (We shall disregard the seconds when I was going "uh, is James the son, then?")

Plummet
the movement sent Harry's fingers sliding slickly across his hole, - they're called "smutlets" for a reason, huh! Nice line. Was a bit scared reading this one because I feared you were going to go with twisty Evil!Harry ending :o)

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Oh the Harry/Ron is just perfect!

Thanks!

Wow, three of your smutlets all at once makes me a very, very happy girl!

"Tidal" is my personal favourite, it's so beautifully intense! And "Tidal" and "Plummet" go so well together. I also love Harry/Ron, and the perfect balance of tender love and post-war trauma.

Thank you so much for writing these!

"Tidal" is my favorite of the bunch, too, and I have no idea where it came from, either.

Thanks!

And Snape, who disdains tender words, says Yes and Yes and Yes.

I throw flowers at you.

To tell someone -- to tell a Potter -- what he craved.

And now I throw even more flowers.

All three are lovely, naturally, but for some reason the Harry/Snape ones are really getting to me today. (My Rickman fixation has been high lately -- I spent a shameful few hours the other night reading post-Sense & Sensibility novellas...)

Thanks! I'm glad you liked them. Those lines were particular favorites of mine. Clearly you are a reader of great discernment and fine taste.

I spent a shameful few hours the other night reading post-Sense & Sensibility novellas

Where? Where?!

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Mmm, those smutlets were just gorgeous <3

Thanks!

Those are all lovely, as always, but your Snape POV really grabbed me today. It's so unique and so true.

Oh, good -- I'm glad that one worked for you. Snape POV is fun to write because you get to use big words and semicolons.

Wow - they were all great. Not that I'd expect otherwise. ;-) I think "Plummet" was my favorite - fear and its conquest. Though "Surviving" really captured a lot of past and present emotions in a short space.

Had to look back a ways to find out what kind of challenge you wanted - "a pairing and an attitude/emotion/abstract noun of some sort." Okay... I'll try to think of something unusual.

Hermione/Neville/Ginny, muddle

Thanks!

Oh, yeah, I probably should have put the challenge requirements up there -- though I've gotten some of my most interesting ones from challenges that really didn't fit that pattern. Anyway, looking forward to taking on a different trio!

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Excellent smutlets. Truly wonderful.

To be pounded out of his mind, fucked into a state of perfect wordlessness, freed from the continual tyranny of speech. So get on with it, if you please.

Guh.

Hee! Thank you. I have a feeling being Snape's lover would be a rather demanding position. And heaven help you if you didn't get it just right.

Oh, perfection. Excuse me while I fanboy spastically in your direction. *Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Man does not live by schmorn alone, but I'm trying, I'm trying.

You liked it! I'm so glad! The inventor of the word "schmorn" deserves good smut, at the very least.

I love the Harry/Ron (I still don't read in HP other than your Harry/Ron!)

Harry remembers, fifth year, looking at Ron in the changing room and wondering if he'd ever live to have a man's body.

I like thinking of them as adults, looking back at growing up together, with half a lifetime of friendship and loyalty between them.

When you weren't sure whether I was dead or alive, when your own life hinged on how quickly you escaped, you didn't leave me behind.

There's lots of great HP out there, as I'm sure all sorts of people have told you at length. I'm glad you enjoyed mine, anyway.

I read these all at work (which may have been a mistake) and after Surviving, which I had saved for last, I sat quietly for a moment and smiled. Thank you.

Thank you!

Oh, the schmorn is lovely. Heartache and hope all at once. (And so deliciously tactile, too...)

Still looking for challenges, eh? How 'bout some Draco/Neville? ;)

Chest hair is good for the deliciously tactile side of things.

Hm. Draco/Neville. Well, I'll give it a try ...

Oh, you're Harry/Ron is powerful, and silently passionate. I find I believe it.

How about...

Percy/Harry, Incredulous.

Icarus

Thanks!

I started trying to do your smutlet today, but it wants to be a real story. i'm not sure whether I'm going to let it or not, but I imagine the legal battle between me and the story will take a while ...

Yay, thank you very much for the smutlet! It's perfect! It's exactly like I want. The exclusiveness of Snape and Harry and the fact that even when Harry could find lovers by the dozen to exclaim over him, pamper him and spoil him, he keeps coming back to the snapping fury of Snape's bludger-black eyes, the cold disdain of his voice is my dreams come true. I love the way you make them like they're boen just for each other :)

Btw, I've been trying to send you the scanlations, but don't know why I couldn't attach the files. Now I try to separate the files into little zips, I just hope it could work.

Thank you again for the smutlets =)

Oh, good! I was really hoping you'd like it. I think the two of them have a lot more in common than they think, and they could very well end up thoroughly bonded together.

Sorry to reach you by this, but I want to tell you that 2 mails that I've sent to resonant8@att.net are failed to be delivered since your mailbox is full. Do you have other email address so I can send the scanlations?

Thanks.

That's really odd. My mailbox isn't full. I have no idea why that would happen.

But you could try my backup mail: resonant8(at)yahoo(dot)com.

Thanks for trying, anyway!

I can never get enough of your Snarry. I hope you gift us with many more in the future.

Aww. Thanks!

'Surviving' was gorgeously written. There was so much implied within such a short space and the bond between them seemed to glow in amongst the darkness. Lovely.

(Oh, and the reason I haven't commented on the other two is that I tend not to read Snarry)

Thanks! (These are both adult!Harry stories, if that helps. But if you just hate Snape, I can't help you, because he's all there and naked and all ...)

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Oh, the Harry/Ron! You put so much into this little story, not a word is wasted.

Aww! Thanks!

Mmmmmm, as usual. Grievous, this time.

I want Hooch/McGonagall, Memory.

Hoo! You're a tough one! I'll give it a try, but I make no promises.

And glad you enjoyed these.

So so so good. All of them. I should print out your "smutlets" to study and practice my writing. I don't know how you get so much in so few words. There is so much unspoken in between the words, is what it is. If I tried to tell you what I liked about each, it would probably be longer than the stories themself! And wonderful, simple, straightforward language. You are one of the few people also that can make me read het. ;) I'm not sure I've ever given you feedback before, so I'm very sorry for that because I've really enjoyed your writing. I'm adding you to my f-list.

Wow -- thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them. It's kind of freeing to be able to write sex without the 20K beforehand telling how they ended up there and the 20K afterward telling what happened next.

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