resonant: Ray Kowalski (Due South) (Vanilla)
resonant ([personal profile] resonant) wrote2004-09-23 12:49 pm

Three new HP smutlets

Wrote one of these at the allergist and the other two while waiting for my daughter to finish her ballet class (which is the sort of thing that makes me feel I'm living a thrilling double life).

Surviving for [livejournal.com profile] teneagles, who asked for "postwar Harry/Ron schmorn." (And isn't 'schmorn' just a delicious word?)

Tidal for [livejournal.com profile] lada_hitam, who asked for Harry/Snape, though it may not be the sort of Harry/Snape she likes.

Plummet for [livejournal.com profile] maryavatar, who asked for Harry/Snape, "plummet." (Her challenge was just too good not to use it for a title.)

Got a doctor's appointment tomorrow and a ballet class every week, so I'm still welcoming challenges for these!

Edited to add the usual: If you want to see links to all the smutlets on one page, go to the story notes here.

And now for the short feedback:

[identity profile] skuf.livejournal.com 2004-09-23 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Surviving
Loved this - but what's not to love in Best!Friend Harry/Ron? Particularly was moved by this line: where a son died and an orphan was born - beautiful. (We shall disregard the seconds when I was going "uh, is James the son, then?")

Plummet
the movement sent Harry's fingers sliding slickly across his hole, - they're called "smutlets" for a reason, huh! Nice line. Was a bit scared reading this one because I feared you were going to go with twisty Evil!Harry ending :o)
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Re: And now for the short feedback:

[identity profile] wordwitch.livejournal.com 2004-09-24 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
A son has parents, which he suddenly did not; ergo, the son died, and was reborn as an orphan.

Heartbreaking.

Re: And now for the short feedback:

[identity profile] skuf.livejournal.com 2004-09-24 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I got it - it just took me a couple of seconds :o)

[identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com 2004-09-24 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
[beaming at you] Thanks!

Was a bit scared reading this one because I feared you were going to go with twisty Evil!Harry ending

Eek! No! I want to make Snape happy! (Even though being happy would probably make him miserable.)