9. Can anyone else read my laptop screen from here?

[resonant]

Things I'm thinking while reading sex scenes (in ascending order of frequency)

1. Not thinking at all. Laughing, crying, aroused, and elated. OMG. Wow.

2. Eee, this is just what they need! This puts back together the heart that the first part of the story broke. I'm so happy now!

3. This is really well done. Wish I'd thought of it.

4a. What, all that buildup for two paragraphs that don't even tell me what specific act they're doing?
4b. What, two paragraphs of buildup and the entire rest of the story is finger-by-finger detail of sex between two people who are already aware they're in love?

5. Wait, you don't mean to tell me he's going to reward that sort of behavior? Oh, lord, he is.

6. [skim skim skim]

7. Nope. [back arrow]

8. Hm. Other people's arms must be a lot longer than mine are.

Comments

[resonant]

I know for a fact that other people have longer fingers than I do, but wouldn't you think all that would be proportional within the same body? Apparently not. Or else people are writing things they've never tried.

[out_there]

Or else people are writing things they've never tried.

It' sthe internet, so you totally can't discount that option.

But, hmmm, proportions can be different. I know for a fact that Mum's legs are the same length as mine, yet I'm nearly two inches taller -- it's all in the torso. So maybe if people have shorter torsos/proportions, they can reach.