Nitpicking, again.

[resonant]

Word I don't ever want to read again in a story:

Obsidian.

Thank you, and goodnight.

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[tinderblast.livejournal.com]

I have to add: turgid in a 'love scene'. I just don't know where to start with that one. It's just so grotesque, and desperately un-sexy.


brodie