New HP story: Four and a Half Minutes

[resonant]

A small G-rated snippet as a belated birthday gift for darthfox.

Four and a Half Minutes
Harry/Ron -- G -- 4K
After a Potions accident, Ron needs something.

Thanks to terrio for beta.

Comments

[darthfox.livejournal.com]

oh, it's lovely! i'm so glad i saw it was here before i went to bed. :-D

[marinarusalka.livejournal.com]

Oh, that is so sweet. I just want to take this story and cuddle it. Love-love-love the descriptions of all the different ways everyone does their four and a half minutes. Such perfect little character snapshots.

[kudra2324.livejournal.com]

this is so sweet and lovely. it made me do one of those lopsided half grins :).

p.s. um, you wouldn't think of writing the "bit longer" part, would you? :).

[reginagiraffe]

They're 17 year old boys. I'd say 4 1/2 minutes is about right. *g*

This is adorable.

[wildmachinery.livejournal.com]

Oh, I so needed that. *g* That was almost unbearably lovely and adorable, and I absolutely adore the bit about Seamus and Dean's neck rubs. Thanks for writing this.

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Oh. Oh, yeah.

I love this.

The voices are spot-on. Honest -- this is Rowling, only better.

:-)

[jood.livejournal.com]

Oh my GOD so yummy. OH oh oh oh, Harry and Ron. So lovely and sweet.








P.S. My birthday is July 6th. I'm just sayin'.

[ellen-fremedon.livejournal.com]

Wow.

I'm dead from the sweetness. The perfectly-characterized sweetness (Lupin! and the Slytherins! and everyone! So perfect!)

[giglet.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

AW!

Seamus and Dean gave amazing neck rubs. The funniest thing was that they both did it exactly the same way, which meant that either they'd learned it from each other, or Ginny had taught them both.

Harry's not stupid, is he?*g*

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

As long as it shows up in the portal, (http://www.livejournal.com/portal/) I should remember. I'm trying to do better about people's birthdays.

You have no interests in your info, though. So. What are you interested in? (Fox has no useful interests, either, and I made her give me a list of words, which I then ignored, so you see how this stuff works.)

[sanj.livejournal.com]

Oh, *yay*. With hugging! And holding!

Harry needed this. Dude, *I* needed this. Thank you!!

[celandineb.livejournal.com]

*dies*

That is beautiful, simply beautiful. Each characterization so brief and yet so telling.

[millefiori.livejournal.com]

Delightful!! I loved the bit about Ginny, Dean and Seamus; and the Slytherins; and sweet, funky Luna; and Neville--such a darling!--touching Harry's foot while he ate. But of course the end was the best, and I was waiting for it just like Harry was. He does sorely miss Ron when Ron's not around, doesn't he? Lucky Darthfox!

[daemonluna.livejournal.com]

That was fantastically charming! Loved the image of the Slytherins all solmenly lining up to shake his hand, and Hermione's arm casually slung around his neck, and Snape with a vicar's handshake, and of course, the incredible sweetness of Harry and Ron.

[jood.livejournal.com]

EEP! EEEP EEP! YAY!

Okay, interests. Hrm.

I love your Transfigurations!Ron so much, I'd like to see something from his POV, maybe after the story, or while he's using the butter knife to pry that styrofoam cup off Draco's forehead. Or a series of vignettes from his POV as he fixes things throughout the castle. Or his first night on duty as caretaker, dealing with naughty kids.

Oh, I would love to see the kind of romance that Ron is capable of, particularly with that Hermione.

::bouncy::

[xayide2.livejournal.com]

I've been waiting for you to write another HP story, they're just so good. I still love Transfigurations and I saved a pic that Theban Band did for you.....the greenhouse...*grins*

Thanks for the extra HP boost. :D

[nattish.livejournal.com]

Ooh, you squeeze my heart with every story I read! How do you do it? Oooh!

Seriously, every word of your fics seem significant. They're not drawn out or too short; they're just right.

In this one, the descriptions of how different everyone was when it came to something as simple as touching Harry was so interesting. I especially enjoyed Snape's and Ginny's. And of course the romance was sweet and simple, just like those boys. :D Very nice work.

[glitterdemon.livejournal.com]

wonderfully charming; the descriptions of how everyone chose to touch him was brilliant and touching. i only wish it were longer. ;)

[glitterdemon.livejournal.com]

i just realised that there's a pun in there. i didn't mean for there to be a pun in there. :\

so sweet

[quatre_k.livejournal.com]

That was sweet I loved it.

[raucousraven.livejournal.com]

gzh!

[trans. incoherent noise indicating extreme delight]

That was so sweet and comforting and Harryesque. I especially like the Slytherins here, although Neville with his hand on Harry's foot runs a close second.

[shocolate.livejournal.com]

That was utterly lovely.

Ron is such a Gryffindor.

And Harry sitting there waiting for him was so cute.

[skuf.livejournal.com]

Loved Luna and Dean/Seamus[/Ginny] and Lupin! Platonic Remus/Harry, *squee*!! And a smidgen of platonic Harry/Snape, ahhhhhhh :o)

And you write the best kisses.



Plz write more fic - I get fevers and chills if I go more than twenty days without some of your writing.

[karajanks.livejournal.com]

It's 6am, raining, and so cold here, and I settled down on the couch with a hot pot of tea, thick socks, a heavy quilt, and this... this story is so cozy it couldn't have fit more perfectly with my morning. Thank you!