Untitled depressing Harry/Snape snippet
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resonantCould vaguely be considered a follow-up to Down, You Lie Down Too.
Draco wiped roughly at his tear-streaked face as Snape's wand was tossed onto his pyre. What are you doing here, Potter? he spat when he saw me. Pretending to grieve? You hardly knew him.
there was a bruise on his hip when I sucked him
a bruise, she shoved him, hard, her hand on his cloak so he went spinning and face-first over the corner of the library table, and laugh she *laughed*, such a handsome offer, but alas, my dear, there's no time to renew our acquaintance
until I killed her killed all of them
and later when I asked he didn't even blush
oh, they do things differently among the vampires, a shame you won't have the luxury of a misspent youth, Mr. Potter
and quiet he was so quiet even when he came I said to myself when all this is over
not a relationship of course me a hero and him so unpretty but
a day a weekend for old times sake and then scream I will make him talk I will make him say my name
but even when he held them off it was Potter it was *through* me Potter cast it *through* me you *must*
and there was a bruise on his hip and kiss his dead mouth in my mind I did but there was no *time* --
No, Draco, you're right, I said, I really didn't know him at all.
Draco wiped roughly at his tear-streaked face as Snape's wand was tossed onto his pyre. What are you doing here, Potter? he spat when he saw me. Pretending to grieve? You hardly knew him.
there was a bruise on his hip when I sucked him
a bruise, she shoved him, hard, her hand on his cloak so he went spinning and face-first over the corner of the library table, and laugh she *laughed*, such a handsome offer, but alas, my dear, there's no time to renew our acquaintance
until I killed her killed all of them
and later when I asked he didn't even blush
oh, they do things differently among the vampires, a shame you won't have the luxury of a misspent youth, Mr. Potter
and quiet he was so quiet even when he came I said to myself when all this is over
not a relationship of course me a hero and him so unpretty but
a day a weekend for old times sake and then scream I will make him talk I will make him say my name
but even when he held them off it was Potter it was *through* me Potter cast it *through* me you *must*
and there was a bruise on his hip and kiss his dead mouth in my mind I did but there was no *time* --
No, Draco, you're right, I said, I really didn't know him at all.
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Date: 11/10/02 06:52 am (UTC)Can't remember if I told you how much I liked "Down, You Lie Down Too" when you posted it, but I really did. You're doing wonderful stuff here.
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Date: 11/10/02 08:44 am (UTC)Is this part of a larger fic? Or is it stand-alone? Either way, I like it very much.
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Date: 11/10/02 10:40 am (UTC)And wow. Excellent.
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Date: 11/10/02 04:40 pm (UTC)It's the details that get me.
Powerful, powerful stuff.
Carla
sigh
Date: 11/10/02 05:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 11/10/02 06:56 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 11/10/02 06:58 pm (UTC)What happened was, I got an LoC on "Down, You Lie Down Too" from someone who said, "Would you please consider writing a sequel, please please please?"
And I went, Huh? Write a sequel saying what, exactly, that wasn't there in the story? I mean, the only way you could do a sequel would be if you did something like ............ hm. Say!
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Date: 11/10/02 07:00 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 11/10/02 07:00 pm (UTC)Re: sigh
Date: 11/10/02 07:01 pm (UTC)