Another new DS snippet: Fascination
Jul. 6th, 2004 03:16 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
resonantOnce a week I have to go sit in the allergist's office for twenty minutes while they keep an eye on me and make sure my allergy shot hasn't sent me into convulsions or anything.
My allergist tunes his office radio to that so-called Christian so-called music. Listening to it for twenty minutes makes me just crazy to break a commandment or twelve.
Twenty minutes isn't long enough to write a story, but it's plenty long enough to write a sex scene.
So here's the one I wrote today.
Fascination (Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17)
By the way, to inspire me, I started out with a pairing and an attitude (curiosity). If anybody wants to fling other attitudes at me -- well, as I mentioned, I get an allergy shot every week.
My allergist tunes his office radio to that so-called Christian so-called music. Listening to it for twenty minutes makes me just crazy to break a commandment or twelve.
Twenty minutes isn't long enough to write a story, but it's plenty long enough to write a sex scene.
So here's the one I wrote today.
Fascination (Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17)
By the way, to inspire me, I started out with a pairing and an attitude (curiosity). If anybody wants to fling other attitudes at me -- well, as I mentioned, I get an allergy shot every week.
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Date: 7/6/04 01:20 pm (UTC)Just, y'know, GUH.
Because, really?
GUH.
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Date: 7/6/04 07:51 pm (UTC)And, hey, appropriate icon!
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Date: 7/6/04 01:21 pm (UTC)Oh, my.
My allergist used to make me do the sit-and-wait, but I signed a waiver. I figure if I haven't blown up in the last five years, the chances of it suddenly happening are pretty slim.
Do you write Sirius/Remus? If so, them, and "wonder."
Or if not, Harry/Draco and "restlessness".
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Date: 7/6/04 07:53 pm (UTC)sue themget hurt.Do you write Sirius/Remus? If so, them, and "wonder."
Or if not, Harry/Draco and "restlessness".
Hm. More enthusiastic about S/R than about H/D these days, though it's so hard knowing that they are doooooooooomed ....
I'll give it a shot.
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Date: 7/6/04 01:21 pm (UTC)"Oh. Well carry on then."
Have I mentioned lately how much I love your dialogue?
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Date: 7/6/04 07:55 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:26 pm (UTC)*fans self frantically*
Wow.
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Date: 7/6/04 07:56 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:31 pm (UTC)Oh boy, that gave me a happy little tingle. Thanks :)
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Date: 7/6/04 07:57 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:31 pm (UTC)Guhguhguh. If this is what Christian music does to you, I'm buying you every redneck born-again CD in the state of Alabama.
I figure that'll get me a shitload of porn. :)
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Date: 7/6/04 07:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:33 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 07:59 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:39 pm (UTC)*g*
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Date: 7/6/04 08:00 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:41 pm (UTC)I feel I should have more intelligent commentary, but really, I don't. *g* That was delightful. Thank you.
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Date: 7/6/04 08:01 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 08:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:44 pm (UTC)... you say you're at the allergists every week, eh?
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Date: 7/6/04 08:03 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it!
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Date: 7/6/04 01:55 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 08:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 01:57 pm (UTC)And you, of course. :)
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Date: 7/6/04 08:04 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 02:00 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 08:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 02:05 pm (UTC)I tool allergy shots for 5 years. All I did was read the expensive magazines. Somehow I think I was missing out.
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Date: 7/6/04 08:06 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 7/6/04 03:28 pm (UTC)And how lucky for us - I can't think of anything better in the world than a resonant sex scene ... you make me feel like I'm right there watching (what a thought!)
And loved "well, then, carry on" - as someone said up above, you have such a way with dialogue ...
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Date: 7/6/04 08:11 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 03:43 pm (UTC)That was incredibly hot, and tender, and well hot!
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Date: 7/6/04 08:12 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 03:58 pm (UTC)That was hot. Um..::flails for other compliments in the face of guh::
Mwah..
Also, I sympathize. This Friday I get to do the same thing. ::longs to be on maintenance dose::
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Date: 7/6/04 08:13 pm (UTC)Dare you to do a smut improv while you're there. We all benefit!
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Date: 7/6/04 04:10 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 08:15 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 04:18 pm (UTC)Oh, you mean an attitude for writing inspiration? Oh. Well, um, how about Ray/Fraser, with awe?
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Date: 7/6/04 08:16 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 04:34 pm (UTC)That is all.
Is that all? :)
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Date: 7/6/04 08:17 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 05:35 pm (UTC)... Snape/Lupin, "deliberation". If you would.
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Date: 7/6/04 08:18 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 7/6/04 05:50 pm (UTC)I'm just saying.
*g*
Gah. This was...Wow. God. And really, as hot (and lordy - was it HOT) the sex is, it's them and the way you write them that really turns my crank.
Thank you so much for this! You've been really making my day lately!
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Date: 7/6/04 08:19 pm (UTC)