New Breakfast Club smutlet: Bare
Apr. 24th, 2007 09:10 amI've posted a new Breakfast Club smutlet to my website. This is in the Higher Education universe, but you should be able to follow it just fine even if you haven't read the original.
Bare
Bender/Brian -- NC-17 -- 866 words
John lives for danger
With beta thanks to
cesperanza.
Bare
Bender/Brian -- NC-17 -- 866 words
John lives for danger
With beta thanks to
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Date: 4/24/07 02:25 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 02:27 pm (UTC)*gets a lump in her own throat* Oh, John, you're such a sap, in your own way. *squishes both of them*
I love your Higher Education verse, and this is totally giving me the warm fuzzies; I'm grinning like a loon. Thank you!
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Date: 4/24/07 02:30 pm (UTC)::Flails in a shameful display of fangirl fangirling::
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Date: 4/24/07 02:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 02:47 pm (UTC)But, hell, sex is never going to be hygienic. People who don't want to get dirty should stay up and play Parcheesi. Ha! So wonderfully John! You manage to make so much emotion come through, even while John calls Brian a moron. :D
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Date: 4/24/07 02:52 pm (UTC)Now I have to go reread Higher Education, obviously.
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Date: 4/24/07 02:52 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 03:07 pm (UTC)And the last two or three paragraphs? That is why you are genius. Loved this!
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Date: 4/24/07 03:17 pm (UTC)Two typos that I notice: first slippery touch of his bare cock against John's as and "Can't belive it," Brian says.
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Date: 4/24/07 03:35 pm (UTC)oh, man, i am so in love this, and with them, and just, YES. thanks so much for sharing this!
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Date: 4/24/07 03:45 pm (UTC)Oh my God, you melted my heart with that line. Wow.
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Date: 4/24/07 03:59 pm (UTC)That was lovely.
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Date: 4/24/07 04:15 pm (UTC)A tiny little correction --
At the first slippery touch of his bare cock against John's as
I think you want another "s," there. :-)
Seriously, though. GUH. I need to own this movie, like, yesterday.
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Date: 4/24/07 04:19 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 4/24/07 04:38 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 05:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 05:19 pm (UTC)Oh, I love this. I love so much that you've managed to let John and Brian both grow up and they're still, well, John and Brian. Really, I think what I like the most about both this and "Higher Education" is that not only is the sex convincing, the relationship is convincing. We can see what they are to each other, and how they fit together, but we're not being beaten over the head with it. Beautiful work.
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Date: 4/24/07 05:23 pm (UTC)*flails*
*gestures wildly*
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Date: 4/24/07 06:44 pm (UTC)I love this universe so, so much.
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Date: 4/24/07 07:30 pm (UTC)"So come, moron," John says. He's got a lump in his throat. It pisses him off.
This is so John, it's perfect.
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Date: 4/24/07 08:36 pm (UTC)It's lines like this -- dry and human and perfectly timed -- that make me love your stories, even the tiny ones, so much. PWC. Porn With Character.
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Date: 4/24/07 09:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/24/07 11:16 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 4/25/07 01:04 am (UTC)This is gorgeous, too, but no surprise! Thanks so much for the gift to your fans.