New SGA smutlet: Input

[resonant]

I've posted the second of the polled smutlets to my website.

Input
McKay/Sheppard -- NC-17 -- 472 words
Rodney thinks it's too soon. Tough, because John's already made his mind up.

Beta thanks to cesperanza.

Comments

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Oh, gnuh. That was so hot and sweet and well, gnuh. :)

[special-trille.livejournal.com]

"Only 472 words," I thought. "I can totally read that while my grandmother is in the room."

I got about a sentence and a half in and then had to be backspacing like crazy.

Please to be taking that as a positive!

[sage]

Oh, num! John is so hot when he wants and wants and finally goes after it.

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

*combusts*

[anatsuno.livejournal.com]

That's how the best relationships work, isn't it? Sweet, sweet trade-off. Thank you.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Whew. That's some smutlet. :-D

[monanotlisa.livejournal.com]

Hngh. Guh. asdöfkasdjf and other helpless exclamations of appreciation.

You rock my world, Res, because this isn't PWP; it's PW/C -- Porn With Characterisation, and God, what a characterisation it is. this here blew my mind:

Neither of them has ever tried it before, John because it would have seriously messed with his carefully maintained image of himself as a straight guy, and Rodney because before John came along he actually was a straight guy.

YES. SO MY JOHN AND RODNEY.

Darn, I do have to post these "20 Bits of Personal Canon" after all, eh?

Can I interest you in an icon? What would you like?

[ladyflowdi.livejournal.com]

Um. GUH. First time fics are my absolute favorite, and... oh. Oh. So delicious, so good.

[yesitsmimi.livejournal.com]

Okay - ya know, you always write the hottest things but this? Is just THE HOTTEST THING EVER. I... yes please more.

[nudaydreamer.livejournal.com]

Oh my. Wow. Won't-take-no-for-an-answer John is *seriously* hot.

[mecurtin.livejournal.com]

Once again, your John is *totally* my John. Only hotter than I dared imagine:

His heart is pounding wildly, flight reflex kicking in, sweat springing to the surface of his skin. He tips his head back and groans, pushing slow but steady against his own resistance. He wasn't expecting his body to react like this, wild adrenaline, the best kind of rush, his own voice unfamiliar in his ears.

Cesca knows. Trust the Cesca.

[sp23.livejournal.com]

Oops, left this in the wrong place. Anyway....

Oh, god. Such hot sweetness is so few words. Mmmmm.

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

Darn, I do have to post these "20 Bits of Personal Canon" after all, eh?

WHAT WOULD I HAVE TO DO, MONA? JUST TELL ME.

[monanotlisa.livejournal.com]

Just keep fangirling me, plz!1!!!!

*bask*

[lovelokest.livejournal.com]

Oh what a wonderful way to start a Saturday morning. Guh!

[incidental-fire.livejournal.com]

Wow. Oh wow. You managed to capture so much of their relationship, histories and individual character (plus smut!) in such a short snippet - just amazing.

Neither of them has ever tried it before, John because it would have seriously messed with his carefully maintained image of himself as a straight guy, and Rodney because before John came along he actually was a straight guy.

I loved this line - it captured one of my favorite SGA concepts and the entire sense of the piece.

[barely-bean.livejournal.com]

I'm always amazed by how you can so much with so few words. This is wonderful and hot.

[kimberlite.livejournal.com]

Whew! That was so hot and so perfectly them that I have nothing more coherent to say. Guh!

[lmondegreen.livejournal.com]

I love, love, love this.

[shrift.livejournal.com]

I don't really have a comment beyond "hnnrrggaah!!" and some flailing at the hot, and you know, I'm okay with that.

[sapote3.livejournal.com]

that was wonderful. I'm so glad these are getting posted!

[bluebrocade.livejournal.com]

Oh my GOD that was hot. GUH.

[paian]

Love it, especially John's pleasure in surrender at the end, and the line He wasn't expecting his body to react like this, wild adrenaline, the best kind of rush, his own voice unfamiliar in his ears, and the title. :-)

[byandby.livejournal.com]

Oh, so much love. So. Much. Love.

[abbylee]

wow. yeah, that works.