resonant: Ray Kowalski (Due South) (Smutlet)
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I've posted the second of the polled smutlets to my website.

Input
McKay/Sheppard -- NC-17 -- 472 words
Rodney thinks it's too soon. Tough, because John's already made his mind up.

Beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] cesperanza.
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Date: 5/26/07 02:51 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (Default)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Oh, gnuh. That was so hot and sweet and well, gnuh. :)

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Date: 5/29/07 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Aww. Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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Date: 5/26/07 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] special-trille.livejournal.com
"Only 472 words," I thought. "I can totally read that while my grandmother is in the room."

I got about a sentence and a half in and then had to be backspacing like crazy.

Please to be taking that as a positive!

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Date: 5/29/07 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Every now and then I'll try to read some smut with the kidlet in the room, usually with the same results!

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Date: 5/26/07 03:00 pm (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (Default)
From: [personal profile] sage
Oh, num! John is so hot when he wants and wants and finally goes after it.

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Date: 5/29/07 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Yeah, I like him that way. Thanks!

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Date: 5/29/07 01:59 am (UTC)

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Date: 5/26/07 03:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
That's how the best relationships work, isn't it? Sweet, sweet trade-off. Thank you.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
These guys are so iffy on social skills, I actually think they do better when they ignore each other's wishes and just go for it.

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Date: 5/26/07 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Whew. That's some smutlet. :-D

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Date: 5/29/07 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Sometimes they just hit me like that. Glad you liked it!

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Date: 5/26/07 03:13 pm (UTC)
ext_1771: Joe Flanigan looking A-Dorable. (Default)
From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
Hngh. Guh. asdöfkasdjf and other helpless exclamations of appreciation.

You rock my world, Res, because this isn't PWP; it's PW/C -- Porn With Characterisation, and God, what a characterisation it is. this here blew my mind:

Neither of them has ever tried it before, John because it would have seriously messed with his carefully maintained image of himself as a straight guy, and Rodney because before John came along he actually was a straight guy.

YES. SO MY JOHN AND RODNEY.

Darn, I do have to post these "20 Bits of Personal Canon" after all, eh?

Can I interest you in an icon? What would you like?



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Date: 5/26/07 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panisdead.livejournal.com
Darn, I do have to post these "20 Bits of Personal Canon" after all, eh?

WHAT WOULD I HAVE TO DO, MONA? JUST TELL ME.

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Date: 5/26/07 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyflowdi.livejournal.com
Um. GUH. First time fics are my absolute favorite, and... oh. Oh. So delicious, so good.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it! (And I love your icon.)

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Date: 5/26/07 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yesitsmimi.livejournal.com
Okay - ya know, you always write the hottest things but this? Is just THE HOTTEST THING EVER. I... yes please more.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! I sometimes worry that these things are only hot to me, you know?

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Date: 5/26/07 03:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] nudaydreamer.livejournal.com
Oh my. Wow. Won't-take-no-for-an-answer John is *seriously* hot.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh yes. Rodney thinks so, too, though he complains about it in a sleepy way afterwards.

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Date: 5/26/07 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com
Once again, your John is *totally* my John. Only hotter than I dared imagine:

His heart is pounding wildly, flight reflex kicking in, sweat springing to the surface of his skin. He tips his head back and groans, pushing slow but steady against his own resistance. He wasn't expecting his body to react like this, wild adrenaline, the best kind of rush, his own voice unfamiliar in his ears.

Cesca knows. Trust the Cesca.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! John characterization varies so wildly (even, for me, from story to story) that I'm always pleased when I hit on one that works for other people.

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Date: 5/26/07 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
Oops, left this in the wrong place. Anyway....

Oh, god. Such hot sweetness is so few words. Mmmmm.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 5/26/07 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovelokest.livejournal.com
Oh what a wonderful way to start a Saturday morning. Guh!

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Date: 5/29/07 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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Date: 5/26/07 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com
Wow. Oh wow. You managed to capture so much of their relationship, histories and individual character (plus smut!) in such a short snippet - just amazing.

Neither of them has ever tried it before, John because it would have seriously messed with his carefully maintained image of himself as a straight guy, and Rodney because before John came along he actually was a straight guy.

I loved this line - it captured one of my favorite SGA concepts and the entire sense of the piece.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so happy all that came through. I always know it's there in my head, but I'm never sure it made it onto the page.

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Date: 5/26/07 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barely-bean.livejournal.com
I'm always amazed by how you can so much with so few words. This is wonderful and hot.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, excellent! Always glad to have confirmation that I haven't left all the important stuff out.

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Date: 5/26/07 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
Whew! That was so hot and so perfectly them that I have nothing more coherent to say. Guh!

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Date: 5/29/07 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Well, excellent. An incoherent reader is a happy reader, usually.

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Date: 5/26/07 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lmondegreen.livejournal.com
I love, love, love this.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you do!

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Date: 5/26/07 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shrift.livejournal.com
I don't really have a comment beyond "hnnrrggaah!!" and some flailing at the hot, and you know, I'm okay with that.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Random syllables from you are worth volumes from anyone else!

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Date: 5/26/07 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapote3.livejournal.com
that was wonderful. I'm so glad these are getting posted!

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Date: 5/29/07 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm happy to have them off the hard drive and out in the world. And happy you enjoyed it!

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Date: 5/26/07 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebrocade.livejournal.com
Oh my GOD that was hot. GUH.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad!

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Date: 5/26/07 05:29 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (Default)
From: [personal profile] paian
Love it, especially John's pleasure in surrender at the end, and the line He wasn't expecting his body to react like this, wild adrenaline, the best kind of rush, his own voice unfamiliar in his ears, and the title. :-)

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Date: 5/29/07 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! I figured anybody who likes things that go over 200 mph probably kind of enjoys a little pain and fear.

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Date: 5/26/07 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byandby.livejournal.com
Oh, so much love. So. Much. Love.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I"m so glad you liked it!

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Date: 5/26/07 07:13 pm (UTC)
abbylee: (Default)
From: [personal profile] abbylee
wow. yeah, that works.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Excellent!

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Date: 5/26/07 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aebhel.livejournal.com
Oh, hey. That was really awesome.

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Date: 5/29/07 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it!

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Date: 5/26/07 08:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com
I voted for this one, and yeah, GUH. So wonderful, and I just love love love this John. Thank you!

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Date: 5/29/07 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Hope it was pretty much what the excerpt led you to expect ... and glad you liked it!
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