New SGA story: Girlfriend

[resonant]

I've posted a new SGA story to my website.

Girlfriend
McKay/Sheppard -- NC-17 -- 6,900 words
"Rodney, you are the strangest man I've ever met. And ... almost the strangest woman."

Beta thanks to cesperanza and terrio.

Comments

[special-trille.livejournal.com]

Holy crap! I love this SO much. Everything that was said in the comments above, just, yes.

[loligo.livejournal.com]

Awesome! You found something new and funny and HOT in the well-worn genderfuck genre!

[amberlynne.livejournal.com]

I adore that Rodney pretty much looks at the whole thing like an experiment and John is the one that's a total freak. Also? Holy crap that was hot. Nnnnnngh. For serious.

Re: I'm not sure why I felt the need to do this...

[incidental-fire.livejournal.com]

I don't know why either, but I'm so glad you did. That's *hysterical*!

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Oh, YAY; that was awesome.

This is one of my favorite subcategories of SGA stories, and I love the way you handled it here: Rodney's matter-of-factness, John freaking out and giving Rodney the girlfriend treatment, Rodney's weird sense of displacement first in the female body and then in the male body again, the way things get seriously hot when John does girl!Rodney from behind, the way things get even hotter when Rodney -- himself again -- does the same to John.

*\o/*

[percysowner.livejournal.com]

This is a wonderful genderswap. It's very hot whichever sex Rodney is. I can certainly see him being just this matter offact about the whole thing. I did love your quote in the story notes. Thanks for sharing.

[mamadeb.livejournal.com]

Genderswap isn't my favorite thing, but this - this was beautiful. I think Rodney would have freaked more if it had not be voluntary and temporary, but, well, it was. And he is *such* a sensualist.

On the other hand - once again, we have John Sheppard, QueenKing of Repression.

Like a straight man would be fantasizing about the woman he's having sex with having manparts....Silly guy.

[horridporrid.livejournal.com]

Love, love, love! Seriously, you hit just about every button I have in the best way possible. :D Rodney's matter-of-fact-ness about his new (and best ever!) boobs; poor John trying so damn hard to be the gentleman he feels he has to be with a lady; Rodney being anything but a lady (oh, I loved that he was, at heart, a guy with boobs (boobs!) *g*). And of course the way John just came undone when finally, finally, the lady left the room completely and he got pure, unadulterated Rodney. Perfect!

(Oh and that hot-dog metaphor? Love!)

[northern]

Oh my fucking god... That was hot. Going into my deli.cio.us for sure.

[giglet.livejournal.com]

I cannot begin to tell you how much I love this! But it's a whole whole lot!

[jackie-brown.livejournal.com]

Guh. I like Rodney being the in-charge one and man, was he in charge here. So bossy and sexy. No wonder John was putty :)

[helenish.livejournal.com]

ooh, like everyone else, I liked this a lot. Also, it was ho-double-t-hot.

[almostnever.livejournal.com]

You made me love Rodney so much with this story, and made me want to smack John upside the head, but by the end, I loved him too. Just wonderful stuff!

Re: I'm not sure why I felt the need to do this...

[carolyn-claire.livejournal.com]

:) Rodney IS T-Rex. I love T-Rex.

Re: I'm not sure why I felt the need to do this...

[carolyn-claire.livejournal.com]

I saw T-Rex saying these lines while I was reading, I really did. I think it's brain damage of some sort. *g*

[briar_pipe]

Oh, boys. Er.

My cheeks hurt from grinning so much.

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

Your sense of humor absolutely slays me--this whole thing is so funny and clever. What a breath of fresh air, man.

[ladyvyola.livejournal.com]

John, you freak.

Thank heavens you have Rodney to charge without regard to modesty or mores right through to what feels good!

Re: I'm not sure why I felt the need to do this...

[incidental-fire.livejournal.com]

But at least it's the *good* kind of brain damage. :)

That was really good!

[zorrorojo.livejournal.com]

I don't usually read Rodney as woman stories after a few bad experiences, but I took a chance and wasn't disappointed - that totally rocked. Great story.

[dodificus.livejournal.com]

"That's not what turns me on," Sheppard said, and he pulled himself up until his head was on the pillow beside Rodney's and carefully wrapped his big hand around Rodney's cock. "I think -- this turns me on."

Well, it definitely turned *me* on:)

Sheppard as sexually retarded is never not funny in my book, I loved this.

[bironic.livejournal.com]

What ladycat777 said. Love this - Rodney's voice, and Sheppard's repression, and the sheer hotness that was each of their encounters, even the awkward ones, and the way you describe the girl parts and girl sensations (full bladder! hot dog!), and, yes. Finding a new fic from you is like being handed a big cookie.

[smallbeer.livejournal.com]

(:sigh: I commented in the noticeboard community by mistake. But I really mean it! so I'm going to say it twice.)

this is a wonderful story; I remain completely in awe of your ability to write sex that is embedded in the narrative, in the characters--to write a sexual *relationship*, in essence, that is more than the sum of its scenes. Oh, and hot. And funny! *g*

[reedfem.livejournal.com]

You're trying to kill us all with your incredible spontaneous-combustion-causing story!

"Impregnate me and you die" - I believe this is when I started laughing while hunching closer and closer over the laptop...

Fabulous!

[sulien77.livejournal.com]

Loved this and I think you've got our guys dead to rights. Sorry I'm not so much with the coherency here, my mind kinda blew a circuit or ten. *is utterly wrecked and will be in bunk now*