New SGA story: Girlfriend

[resonant]

I've posted a new SGA story to my website.

Girlfriend
McKay/Sheppard -- NC-17 -- 6,900 words
"Rodney, you are the strangest man I've ever met. And ... almost the strangest woman."

Beta thanks to cesperanza and terrio.

Comments

[horridporrid.livejournal.com]

Love, love, love! Seriously, you hit just about every button I have in the best way possible. :D Rodney's matter-of-fact-ness about his new (and best ever!) boobs; poor John trying so damn hard to be the gentleman he feels he has to be with a lady; Rodney being anything but a lady (oh, I loved that he was, at heart, a guy with boobs (boobs!) *g*). And of course the way John just came undone when finally, finally, the lady left the room completely and he got pure, unadulterated Rodney. Perfect!

(Oh and that hot-dog metaphor? Love!)

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you liked it! I do wonder how long Rodney would have to be in that body before he actually became a woman and not a guy with boobs; surely sooner or later they'd stop being his favorite toy, just because he has to get some work done.

Glad you liked the hot dog thing, too -- it's not sexy but it's accurate. (I haven't written het this explicit before, and I found the language very ... unwelcoming. There are words for things, but they're not clean of the stain of ugly usage.)

[horridporrid.livejournal.com]

I do wonder how long Rodney would have to be in that body before he actually became a woman and not a guy with boobs...

Heh, I'm not sure how long (probably until the next shiny?) but I do think he'd surprise everyone (read "John" *g*) with how thoroughly he changed once he did. "Yes they're boobs, and I agree they're gorgeous, but omg let it go already!"

Glad you liked the hot dog thing, too -- it's not sexy but it's accurate.

Which works with Rodney who I think puts accuracy over sexy. And you're right about the common language choices being... loaded (or just plain silly). So you did well all around. :D

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

"Yes they're boobs, and I agree they're gorgeous, but omg let it go already!"

I love this! Especially if people's admiration interfered with his work, I can see him losing patience with it very quickly.