New SGA smutlet: Spirit

[resonant]

I've posted a new SGA smutlet to my website. This one is for hj2, unless she only enjoys Rodney with John.

Spirit
McKay/Zelenka -- NC-17 -- 2,750 words
In which it turns out that Radek Zelenka is a sex god.

eta: ooooops, she's hj2, not h2j!

Comments

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Rodney licked his ear. "You're losing your syntax." He felt very pleased with himself for that, especially when the next thing that came out of Radek's mouth wasn't English at all.

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Jesus FUCK.

That was gorgeous. :-)

[paian]

Wow.

I love this pairing, and I really love this fic. From even one so goatless as yourself and Leave your livestock at home to the gorgeous turn at the end, the spreading mindfulness. Beautiful.

[gritkitty.livejournal.com]

I like it! Write more of that anytime. Special kudos to a great Zelenka voice -- and not a word of Czech typed out, which so rarely works for me in a story. Thank you.

[fullygoldy.livejournal.com]

oh! it's a sex meme! fantastic! (as per usual, dear Res)

[liviapenn.livejournal.com]

Hahaha. Zelenka, what have you STARTED? :D

[ellen-fremedon.livejournal.com]

GUH.

And I loved "even one so goatless as yourself," and how Rodney still has to try to one-up Radek, and that Rodney is spreading the viral sex-god meme. (And I'm really curious about the thumb webbing thing...)

But mostly, GUH.

[hj2.livejournal.com]

homg YES. Zelenka!! Eeeeeee! Not what I was expecting but so SO fantastic. Especially this:

He felt very pleased with himself for that, especially when the next thing that came out of Radek's mouth wasn't English at all.

Yesssssss. Also adored the sexual pay-it-forward at the end!

*loves on you so hard*

[shalom]

I was hooked from the dialogue alone in the first scene! You give fantastic voice to the characters. Zelenka is so much more complete from how you've drawn him. Very enjoyable read.

[mz-bstone.livejournal.com]

Hee.

It's Fuck it Forward.

*g*

B

[carolyn-claire.livejournal.com]

I LOVE SEX GOD RADEK! I hearts him like whoa, and now I want to write him some more. So hot, yet so real, and full of what I love about good Rodney/Radek stories--their easy companionability (if that's a word, and I don't think it is), the way they fit together and reflect off each other, perfect foils. You give good companionability. Love this.

[viva-gloria.livejournal.com]

That is sooooo sweet and hot! I'm generally cautious about Zelenka in fic, but I find this rendition utterly credible and, yes, smouldering. I like that Rodney was completely wrong-footed by it, and the way he picked up the theory and ran, and the general self-congratulatory editorialising that he can't resist.

And it's *comfortable* between them. Which is delightful and warming.

And I *love* the idea of sex-god-ness being transmissable. Eventually everyone on Atlantis will be a sex-god, yay!

because I am still very much in love with John, I also squeaked at 'bizarre stage dressing' as encapsulation of his Own Personal Decor.

[jcalanthe]

Ah, this is wonderful! And hot! I too loved the lines about goatlessness and leaving livestock at home. & I very nearly woke up bearfairie to try & figure out the webbing thing - if you had something specific in mind, I hope you'll share. :)

[firesprite1105.livejournal.com]

Heehee. I loved it and now I wonder if anyone's actually filmed a porn version of Pay It Forward.

[sulien77.livejournal.com]

Radek most definitely has it right. This story was mindblowingly hot without so much lurid detail or going to all of the usual places an NC17 story goes. Simply brilliant.

[droolfangrrl.livejournal.com]

*reads story notes, cackles and yells "MINE", and then she runs off with the fic*

[giglet.livejournal.com]

Oh, *yay*! Good sex is communicable! I love this!

[bellabelball.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm, that was lovely hot.

[anatsuno.livejournal.com]

That's just incredibly good all around - funny, warm, clever, hot, lovely - I really want to say it's perfect. I love it HUGELY. You rock.

[dragojustine.livejournal.com]

Hee! Yes, for all we know, he COULD just spout off strings of zed-heavy sounds just for the cachet. *giggles* The introductory banter about goats is probably the most perfect thing EVER.

And then, of course, it gets hot (very hot indeed!). But then... it's contagious! For some reason, that strikes me as the best ending ever. *loves*

[tevere.livejournal.com]

Your writing is always both funny and poetic, and it never fails to make me smile and catch my breath at the sheer sexiness of it all. Yay, and thank you!

[runpunkrun]

I had to take off my McShep tinhat to read this, but I'm glad I did because CRAZY HOT SEX. Of course Zelenka's a dangerous sex god. Now I'm going to put my hat back on and imagine Rodney eventually bumping into Sheppard and totally rocking his world.

[hivesofactivity.livejournal.com]

I love that comradeship and liking roll up with Zelenka's mastery of technique and generosity in bed to result in mindblowing intense sex, with it still being companiable and relaxed afterwards. And, oh, yes, I adore the idea of Rodney initiating Ronon into the Way Of The Radek! (And as a side bonus, the non-OTP-ness of the encounter leaves my tin hat shiny.)

And I love the early irritation Rodney feels at what he sees as Zelenka's over-ostentatious presentation of his refugee status - especially the stuff under the bed - and also his view of John's room as stage dressing!

[stultiloquentia.livejournal.com]

Ahaha perfect! Your dialogue made me laugh out loud. And the 'good sex is communicable' twist that everybody else loves -- yeah. I love it, too.

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you! If it gets me an icon like that one, it's well worth it!

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I love the pairing, too, but I'd never written it before. Zelenka is a semi-undiscovered treasure.