New SGA story: Thirst
Oct. 27th, 2005 10:21 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
resonantThis was supposed to be a smutlet for ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
z_rayne, in exchange for making this icon for me, but it got a little out of hand.
Thirst
McKay/Sheppard -- 20K -- NC-17
How many minutes would a mouthful of lukewarm water add to Sheppard's lifespan? What would it feel like?
Beta thanks toastolat, cesperanza, and terrio.
z_rayne, in exchange for making this icon for me, but it got a little out of hand.Thirst
McKay/Sheppard -- 20K -- NC-17
How many minutes would a mouthful of lukewarm water add to Sheppard's lifespan? What would it feel like?
Beta thanks to
astolat, cesperanza, and terrio.![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
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Date: 10/27/05 03:29 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 10/27/05 03:38 pm (UTC)And that icon... *stares*
*forgets to eat*
*forgets to sleep*
*just stares*
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Date: 10/27/05 03:40 pm (UTC)So nice.
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Date: 10/27/05 03:45 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 10/27/05 03:46 pm (UTC)He thought it might have been the simple thirst of it. Sheppard always appeared to have some hidden depths of something or other -- it was the sort of thing that fueled much heated speculation; Rodney wasn't deaf -- but it wasn't often that he let anyone see him being selfish. Desperate. Out of control. Hungry.
And, right, that was a person you really wanted to get involved with, someone who refused to need anything. That was a recipe for happiness, yes indeed.
And then I said "ha" really loudly in amazement because that's just it! That's who John is! Or one bit of him, anyway. The self-denial KING! And then there was kissing and Rodney straddling and hands under shirts and I had to press my hands to my cheeks and smile. So good!!
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Date: 10/27/05 04:03 pm (UTC)That's a great McKay line.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks.
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Date: 10/27/05 04:07 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 10/27/05 04:14 pm (UTC)Lovely. You have always had the ability to say so much, in so few words.
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Date: 10/27/05 04:15 pm (UTC)I never tire of need. And release.
Fits my mood-theme even.
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Date: 10/27/05 06:51 pm (UTC)I believed every word. :)
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Date: 10/27/05 07:09 pm (UTC)Now I need a drink of water.
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Date: 10/27/05 07:24 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 10/27/05 07:36 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 10/27/05 08:33 pm (UTC)There was a swallow or two left in the canteen. Rodney shook it so Sheppard could hear. "Open your mouth."
Sheppard shook his head mutely.
Rodney reached out and rubbed his thumb over Sheppard's lower lip, and any vestige of doubt he might have had vanished at Sheppard's quick inhalation. "Open, John," he said softly.
This small, significant, gesture totally undoes John and I love it. Thank you!
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Date: 10/27/05 09:03 pm (UTC)Er, pardon me. I seem to have made a mess. *wipes the squee off of your journal*