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After I put up The Hang of It, [livejournal.com profile] icarusancalion wondered what was going on in Ron's head at the same time. When I thought about it, I realized I had no idea. So I wrote it.

Hanging
Harry/Ron -- NC-17 -- 10K
The Hang Of It, from Ron's side.
Underage? Depends on whether you think it happened before July or after.
http://trickster.org/res/hanging.html

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] darthfox for beta.

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Date: 5/19/04 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmeguilotn.livejournal.com
This adds so much to the original ficlet. I especially love what it shows of Ron's character when he thinks "how he'd made Harry queer and given Malfoy and his goons one more weapon to hold over him and added another worry to Harry's life, as if it didn't have enough of them already." The smuttiness was fantastic, but this is even better.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I felt that way, too -- as if it completed the first snippet, somehow, so that together they make a real story.

Thanks!

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Date: 5/19/04 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thisisbone.livejournal.com
he was always going to be this: a shield on Harry's arm, a weapon in Harry's hand

That line makes me limp with love for Ron (and consequently, for YOU for having thought it up).

It might be the most perfect imagery ever.

Thank you for letting us in on Ron's POV.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Aww! Thanks.

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Date: 5/19/04 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterdemon.livejournal.com
God. I may love this even more than the first one, and yeah, I loved the first one. Beautiful writing, thanks for sharing it. :)

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Date: 5/26/04 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked them.

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Date: 5/19/04 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helenish.livejournal.com
The first one was terrific, but this one really hit me where I lived. Ron! ummmph.

[now, you know, if you wanted to turn it into a trilogy, they could go back to school and hook up with Hermione.]

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Date: 5/26/04 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think of you every time I find myself meditating on the Wonderfulness of Ron, which is more and more frequently.

Hm. Somehow in this universe I can only see Hermione on the outside.

Fabulous! Truly enjoyable!

Date: 5/19/04 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistressofrohan.livejournal.com
I read 'The Hang of It' a while back and imagine my delight to find the other half, as it were. Thank you for writing it and sharing it. My favourite line was, hands down, "he was always going to be this: a shield on Harry's arm, a weapon in Harry's hand" Powerful imagery, that!

Well done!

MM (friend of celandineb)

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Date: 5/26/04 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: 5/19/04 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nestra.livejournal.com
Mmm. I love stuff like this, where perfect characterization just seems to evolve into the events of the story. And I love your Ron.

(One typo catch, in case you want to fix it: Harry was still pawing weakly at Ron's zip, which was tricky to get a grip on because the shorts were are too tight.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Thanks. I totally didn't see that.

Ooooh

Date: 5/19/04 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jelazakazone.livejournal.com
As always, I'm left breathless by your writing. I loved this view into Ron's mind.

By the way, I was making tofu and was wondering if you had tried my tofu and also if you found some other fabulous tofu recipes you wanted to share. (There was one a bit back...)

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Date: 5/19/04 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jelazakazone.livejournal.com
Just went and did a re-read of both stories. I love how both boys perceive it was the other doing the pushing/pulling into the bedroom. It's nice how the perspectives are close, but still don't tell exactly the same story. Very interesting.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I wanted it to feel inevitable to both of them, which was kind of tricky.

Re tofu: I'm afraid my family had a violent anti-hoisin-sauce reaction, so that one didn't work well for us.

I've got a decent Pad Thai recipe from Everyday Food, if you don't already have one -- it even got the thumbs-up from the five-year-old, in spite of the fish sauce. And I've discovered that tofu substitutes nicely for beef in my usual stir-fry recipe. And I've learned the Two Necessary Tofu Techniques: pressing and using a nonstick pan.

Otherwise we've just been marinating it in lemon-tahini dressing and putting it on salads. Or, in my case, eating big squares of it with salt.

Anti-hoisin sauce?

Date: 5/28/04 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jelazakazone.livejournal.com
Your family is anti-hoisin sauce? I can't even begin to imagine. However, it's only two teaspoons, so I imagine that you could leave it out just fine.

If you could send me that Phad Thai recipe I'd be much obliged. I have a phad thai recipe I've been playing with for a while and I think it's ok, but it seems to be lacking something too.

What brand of tofu do you like? I used to live in Ithaca NY and could get this wonderful local tofu. Now I have to make do with Nasoya. Nothing else seems even close.

OB fic: The inevitable feeling came out very well. I was really impressed that the perspectives were not conflicting and yet each seemed to think the other was motivating the action into the bedroom. Very clever really. It's stuff like this that keeps me coming back (even if I can't comment intelligibly:)).

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Date: 5/29/04 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I was surprised at the violence of the anti-hoisin-sauce reaction. Maybe we just got a lousy brand.

Brand? There are different brands of tofu? I'm in Peoria. I'm just thankful I can buy the stuff at all.

OK. This recipe comes from Martha Stewart Everyday Food (which is worth checking out; I get a keeper recipe out of it almost every month), but hers had shrimp, and I substituted tofu. I guess you could use both.

8 ounces rice stick noodles
1/4 cup tomato-based chili sauce*
1/4 cup fresh lime juice
3 tablespoons Thai fish sauce (or 3 tablespoons soy sauce and 1 tablespoon anchovy paste)
2 tablespoons vegetable oil
4 garlic cloves, minced
1 package firm tofu
3 cups mung bean sprouts (the fat ones)
8 scallions, trimmed, halved lengthwise, and cut into 2-inch pieces
1 large egg, lightly beaten
For garnish: more mung bean sprouts, fresh cilantro, chopped dry-roasted peanuts

My note: Start by cutting the tofu into 1/4-inch slices. Press it: Lay paper towels or a clean kitchen towel in a baking sheet, add the tofu slices, top with another paper towel or kitchen towel, top with another baking sheet, and set a heavy pan in the top baking sheet. Press for about 15 minutes. Then fry in a little oil in a nonstick pan until a light crust develops, about 3 minutes per side. Set aside.

Martha's recipe resumes here.

1. Bring a large pot of water to boil. Remove from heat, stir in noodles. Soak until softened (3 minutes). Drain, rinse under cold water until cool.

2. In a small bowl, whisk together chili sauce, lime juice, brown sugar, and fish sauce (or soy sauce and anchovy paste).

3. In a large skillet, over medium-high heat, heat oil. Add noodles and chili-sauce mixture; cook, tossing, until combined, about 1 minute. Add bean sprouts and scallions. Pour in egg (my note: I made a hole in the middle of the noodle mixture and cooked the egg there because I wanted it to hold together a little more). Add tofu and toss to combine. Serve with garnishes.

* I have no idea what she means by "tomato-based chili sauce." If she means tabasco, I'm scared of what this would taste like with 1/4 cup in it, but I can't handle much spice. I used about 1/2 teaspoon of tabasco.

Let me know how you like it!

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Date: 5/19/04 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lmondegreen.livejournal.com
I really like this! Ever the faithful Ron, thinking about how it will all affect *Harry*...

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Date: 5/26/04 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Poor Ron might be overthinking just a tad, huh?

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Date: 5/19/04 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sine-que-non767.livejournal.com
Oh, this is gorgeous.

I appreciate 'seeing' Harry's baggy clothes - I don't think I ever read that from another character's POV in a fic.

and understand that this meant Ron was not the only freak in the house

Oh, so *Ron*.

Love the little details, like smeared lenses. And this: after the blacksmith's puzzle of Harry's belt just made me squee. I've never heard that before, and it fit so well.

how he'd made Harry queer and given Malfoy and his goons one more weapon to hold over him and added another worry to Harry's life, as if it didn't have enough of them already, [...] and ten thousand new variables introduced, some of which could end up threatening Harry's life, because nobody had ever hesitated to look on everyone important to Harry as a potential hostage

Amazingly plausible,this train of thought. Original and interesting...and somehow reminds me of Molly Weasley's thinking. It adds another layer of authenticity, to feel he's inherited the worrying :D

If he was ever going to be anything, he was always going to be this: a shield on Harry's arm, a weapon in Harry's hand.

*tears prickle* Beautiful, Tolkienian ending. He's right; you make me believe it's inevitable.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Aww. So sweet! Thank you for this head-swelling comment.

I was hoping the "blacksmith's puzzle" thing wasn't going to be completely baffling.

And I love the idea of Ron with Molly's worrywart tendencies!

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Date: 5/19/04 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellen-fremedon.livejournal.com
Mmm, lovely, and Ron's voice is just perfect. I love the paragraph of chessmaster!Ron, suddenly seeing all the new complications. And I love how Ron thinks Harry is dragging him across the landing, when in "The Hang of It" Harry thinks it's the other way around.

Mmmmmmm.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! Thanks. It surprised me when Ron went all serious on me, but that was where his voice went in my head, and I couldn't get it to go anywhere else.

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Date: 5/19/04 05:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] copracat
Such a hot pair of stories. But this:

When Harry kissed him, it was like that first sweet lungful of air when they took him out of the lake, and suddenly he was almost giddy with relief. He wanted to laugh at the inevitability of it. If he was ever going to be anything, he was always going to be this: a shield on Harry's arm, a weapon in Harry's hand.

This made me go Eee! and hug myself with happiness.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! This is my thing with HP fandom: I want to comfort each and every one of them.

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Date: 5/19/04 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zebra363.livejournal.com
You're the only author, and this is the only pairing, that makes me want to read in HP.

I second/third/fourth what's been said above - this is a GREAT line:

If he was ever going to be anything, he was always going to be this: a shield on Harry's arm, a weapon in Harry's hand.

I also love:

...Harry didn't even know that Ron loved him, and he'd probably be safer if he never found out, but there was no other explanation for this that Ron could give him --


Ron's my favorite character in the books and it's great to see someone as talented as you writing him. Thanks!

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Date: 5/26/04 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Hee! Harry/Ron: The gateway drug.

Glad you liked it.

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Date: 5/20/04 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] everythingisaid.livejournal.com
I'm glad that you decided to write a companion piece from Ron's POV because you write such a wonderful characterization of Ron. I love the smutty bits, but I also love Ron's thoughts. I love the Ron in this fic so v. much.

I recced this piece here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/everythingisaid/137890.html).

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Date: 5/26/04 11:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for the link! And I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: 5/20/04 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halimede.livejournal.com
This is one of those 'that's Ron' stories for me.

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Date: 5/26/04 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Eee! That makes me so happy!

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Date: 6/11/04 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
What I liked best was the shield on Harry's arm and the weapon in Harry's hand, and also the cock 'riding' Ron's palm. And I liked very much the detailed but non-graphic description of Ron's orgasm, how he is in charge of it and holds it off and then wills it forward a bit.

Bah, only you could make me like this pairing!

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Date: 6/14/04 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Cool! I'm glad to have messed with your mind a little.

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Date: 6/14/04 08:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] snoopypez.livejournal.com
I love you.

Ahem. Sorry about that. What I meant to say was....

I love you.

Dammit! ;P

Er.. yes. :D

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Date: 7/1/04 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
[beaming at you] Thank you!

You saw the companion piece, right? (http://trickster.org/res/hanging.html)

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