resonant: Ray Kowalski (Due South) (Fraser tongue)
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A little woodcraft to wish a happy birthday to [livejournal.com profile] cin1607, who knows this stuff way better than I do!

Wedge
Fraser/Kowalski -- NC-17 -- 12K
Choose your first blow wisely, and sometimes it's the only one you'll need.

Beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] cesperanza and [livejournal.com profile] terrio.

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Date: 5/26/05 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Oh, mmmmmmm. This is lovely.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:48 am (UTC)

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Date: 5/26/05 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lyra-sena.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* So sensuous and lovely. Fraser definitely needs to teach Ray how to slow down!

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Date: 6/4/05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
He's just the guy to do it, isn't he.

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Date: 5/26/05 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engenda.livejournal.com
Oh. So good. So very good. Fraser teaching Ray to enjoy. Hmmm.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Yeah, I envy Ray that experience.

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Date: 5/26/05 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Lush, luscious. Deep and delicious. Warm and wonderful.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
[hugs you]

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Date: 5/26/05 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aerye.livejournal.com
This is just lovely and amazing and perfect. Thank you!

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Date: 6/4/05 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Aww. thanks!

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Date: 5/26/05 12:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dsudis.livejournal.com
Ohhhh, guh. Beautiful.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:50 am (UTC)

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Date: 5/26/05 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com
Uhm.......

wow.

That certainly made *my* morning.

Thanks, res!

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Date: 6/4/05 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thank *you*! Glad you liked!

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Date: 5/26/05 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com
Yowza -- this was both totally hot and convincingly real.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, good -- wanted to make sure they still sounded like themselves!

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Date: 5/26/05 01:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Wow, that packed quite a delicious punch. Loved Fraser's dream of taking it slow despite enjoying the wild sex they share...regularly *g*, and finally getting the chance to show Ray what it's like. Plus, rimming is so my kink. *dies*

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Date: 6/4/05 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, mine, too, definitely. And you know Fraser would love it.

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Date: 5/26/05 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com
Oh, my. Gorgeous. Meltingly hot, in that way that's physical but carries an emotional punch. And though I'm not a very good wood-splitter (mostly because [livejournal.com profile] yaoobruni is so good at it that I don't need to be!) it sounds to me like you got the details just right. :-)

Oh, and also, there's all that lovely imagery resonance -- the axe cleaves the wood and it falls apart, Fraser causes Ray to fall apart -- which. Yeah. Happy now.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! (And I've never actually split wood myself!)

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Date: 5/26/05 03:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] beledibabe.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Perfect res story -- beautiful imagery, gorgeous writing, elegance wrapped around a dead-on one-two punch.

You do more with a handful of words than most others can do with a truck load.

::bows::

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Date: 6/4/05 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Aww. Thanks!

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Date: 5/26/05 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lmondegreen.livejournal.com
Mmm, very nice! One good blow and Ray falls nicely apart :-)

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Date: 6/4/05 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
You just have to know where to start.

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Date: 5/26/05 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cin1607.livejournal.com
That was fabulous! I can't believe you remembered my birthday. I can't remember my birthday half the time. *g* Thank you so much!! :D

I found this in my box this morning right before I left for work, so I got to spend the rest of the day grinning madly and being evasive whenever anyone asked me if I got any cool presents. The hewing makes a perfect metaphor and you can split wood in my fort any day. :)

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Date: 6/4/05 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I was really hoping I hadn't made any boneheaded mistakes on account of never having split wood in my life ...

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Date: 5/27/05 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittygoslingp.livejournal.com
So short and so damn amazing. Wonderful metaphor, the outline of a relationship sketched out in a few lines like a Japanese print, sun centre hot and so emotionally resonant, just stunning.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
[re-reading this over and over and beaming like mad]

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Date: 5/28/05 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jack-pride.livejournal.com
He shoves and twitches and thrusts against the sheets, and then Fraser begins to lick seriously, all wet soft tongue, and Ray goes limp so fast that it's almost as if he's fainted

Guh.

Best use of oral fixation ever.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Yeah, you know Fraser would.

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Date: 6/3/05 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] julia-fractal.livejournal.com
Mmm, this is such a gorgeous and sensual piece. Thank you!

"Gettin' older here, Fraser."
*Giggles* So funny, and so very Ray.

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Date: 6/4/05 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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