New SGA story: Poltergeist

[resonant]

For mutecornett, in exchange for three beautiful icons (which I didn't dare let myself upload until I had her smutlet up!):

Poltergeist
McKay/Sheppard -- NC-17 -- 520 words
"Sleep to sex in under ten seconds. Maybe I'm not sorry I woke you after all."

Beta thanks to astolat and cesperanza.

(I also updated the website with another SGA smutlet first published on merrymakings: Knowing.)

Comments

[raveninthewind.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was delicious. I liked the emotional underpinning as much as the smut.

[ubixtiz.livejournal.com]

Mmm, tasty. Sort of decadent. Yum.

[iibnf.livejournal.com]

Aw, that is so sweet! Scary apologetic ghost.

(BTW, you should put a feedback link on your page coz I guessed your LJ and went to the LJ of a gay male who does, very politely, tell everyone to come here. Snert.)

[paian]

The tactile cool/warm and the way their temperatures gradually align, and Rodney's always fast and greedy the first time, but if there's a second time, he likes to take the scenic route, and the way staying the night turns out to be a big deal but it's a bigger deal that it isn't a big deal, so there is no big deal, just them ... love. :-)

[kimberlite.livejournal.com]

"Nice acceleration you've got there,"

Yum! SportsCar!John is totally guh.

[ecaterin.livejournal.com]

Res, you're scary, you know that? You left my fandom behind more than a year ago.....and I'm still enthralled by every word you write.

[http://users.livejournal.com/tesserae_/]

Entirely lovely and real...

[cathexys.livejournal.com]

that was so lovely, the relationship and the depth of their feelings lightly alluded in this one moment of their relationship...and the sex was sweet and hot and...thank you!!!

[pollitt.livejournal.com]

That was hot and gorgeous.

[bluebrocade.livejournal.com]

I loved it.

[merelyn.livejournal.com]

Mmm. Short but perfect.

[barely-bean.livejournal.com]

"You just, you stay over," he says. "You've always stayed over, and I'm sorry if I was supposed to notice it was a big deal."

It wasn't a big deal. That's the big deal.

I love how you write these hot little smutlets, and yet they're also absolutely sweet and filled with all this love. ♥

[mutecornett.livejournal.com]

I LOVE YOU FOREVER.

I'm particularly amazed that you were able to make the ghost/poltergeist thing work so beautifully! Without it being sad at all! And god, there's such sensuality in the words. It's all described so lightly and deftly, and this has totally made MY YEAR and I'm going to gibber in excitement for the foreseeable future!!

EEEEEEE. IT IS PERFECT.

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

I'm actually a little teary. I want to say, "I love how John's done being scared," except that makes me feel like a bad disco tune. This is very sweet, though.

[wildgreentide.livejournal.com]

Oh my god, that was fabulous. I love the way you write them; it always rings true.

[daraq.livejournal.com]

Simply amazing. Thank you for this story and all the other beautiful stories you've posted since I first started reading your work in 1999.

[aurora]

I love your writing so much. This once again proves it. :X

[livrelibre.livejournal.com]

Lovely as ever. In such a short space you say so much about what they are to each other and in such lovely language--sleepy sweet and alliterative "loose, lush, soft-tongued suck." These felt like companion pieces--the worked-open rush of Knowing (man that got me where I live like you always do), the vulnerability, terrifying and longed for of being known and then the realization that there's nothing to fear, the big deal that's not.

[runpunkrun]

That is a lot of hot for 520 words.

[kudra2324.livejournal.com]

mmmmmmm.

[riverlight.livejournal.com]

I just read both of these lovely little pieces, and oh! your writing is just wonderful. Simple and clear and perfect (even when it's porn.) Thanks so much for being such an inspiration. :)

[20thcenturyvole.livejournal.com]

Aw! That was lovely, sweet and hot and shivery.

[palebluebell.livejournal.com]

In 520 words you shouldn't be able to fit as many emotional layers as has been peeled away in this little snippet. That you manage to, with such a subtle hand, is one reason I go into a tailspin when you post a story. This was lovely - thank you.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_inbetween_/]

You're very good.

[saba1789.livejournal.com]

Mmh, nice. Thanks for writing and sharing this :-) .