Wow. This story is excellent in every way a story can be excellent. You made these characters interesting, three-dimensional, surprising, distinct, and alive. John's slow understandings are beautifully and realistically portrayed, his reaction to Brian's grown-up-ness is surprising and real. Wow. It's just great. thank you so much!
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Date: 7/31/05 06:41 am (UTC)