And he's going to say, "Jesus, Rodney -- say something so I -- know it's you," and Rodney's going to put his mouth right against John's ear and say very quietly, "You know it's me," and I for one would have no complaints at all about a scene like that.
Maybe you should write the rest of it. Just as an example, you know. For academic purposes.
I agree that it's completely weird when characters who otherwise won't shut up suddenly go reverently silent during a sex scene, unless there's a good reason why.
And he's going to say, "Jesus, Rodney -- say something so I -- know it's you," and Rodney's going to put his mouth right against John's ear and say very quietly, "You know it's me," and I for one would have no complaints at all about a scene like that.
Let me jump in on this bandwagon because I've just imploded. Except may I say, never mind the purely academic reasons, I want the impurely non-academic!! *is puddle*
Oh, and McKay/Zelenka? Strip seductively, do whatever, as long as it's these two. Guh.
God, I love these 'How to' posts, Res! I am saving them all! This is the best, the BEST EVAH writer's workshop.
As Picasso and Renoir said, 'I paint with my prick', which, back in the palmy days of wymmyns lib I thought was beyond chauvinist piggery but which viewpoint I have now entirely succumbed to. Write with the damn pussy, make me feel hot and shivery, writing is so erotic, and slash is like a supremely distilled condensate of that.
You know it's me... omg, *is puddle again*, that is about it: slash in a nutshell.
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Date: 11/30/05 08:10 pm (UTC)Maybe you should write the rest of it. Just as an example, you know. For academic purposes.
I agree that it's completely weird when characters who otherwise won't shut up suddenly go reverently silent during a sex scene, unless there's a good reason why.
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Date: 11/30/05 08:34 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 11/30/05 10:13 pm (UTC)Although, I'd be really interested in seeing a 'What Not To Do' example scene too. *snicker*
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Date: 11/30/05 10:44 pm (UTC)Let me jump in on this bandwagon because I've just imploded. Except may I say, never mind the purely academic reasons, I want the impurely non-academic!! *is puddle*
Oh, and McKay/Zelenka? Strip seductively, do whatever, as long as it's these two. Guh.
God, I love these 'How to' posts, Res! I am saving them all! This is the best, the BEST EVAH writer's workshop.
As Picasso and Renoir said, 'I paint with my prick', which, back in the palmy days of wymmyns lib I thought was beyond chauvinist piggery but which viewpoint I have now entirely succumbed to. Write with the damn pussy, make me feel hot and shivery, writing is so erotic, and slash is like a supremely distilled condensate of that.
You know it's me... omg, *is puddle again*, that is about it: slash in a nutshell.