Surviving Loved this - but what's not to love in Best!Friend Harry/Ron? Particularly was moved by this line: where a son died and an orphan was born - beautiful. (We shall disregard the seconds when I was going "uh, is James the son, then?")
Plummet the movement sent Harry's fingers sliding slickly across his hole, - they're called "smutlets" for a reason, huh! Nice line. Was a bit scared reading this one because I feared you were going to go with twisty Evil!Harry ending :o)
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Date: 9/23/04 02:38 pm (UTC)Loved this - but what's not to love in Best!Friend Harry/Ron? Particularly was moved by this line: where a son died and an orphan was born - beautiful. (We shall disregard the seconds when I was going "uh, is James the son, then?")
Plummet
the movement sent Harry's fingers sliding slickly across his hole, - they're called "smutlets" for a reason, huh! Nice line. Was a bit scared reading this one because I feared you were going to go with twisty Evil!Harry ending :o)