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resonantThings I'm thinking while reading sex scenes (in ascending order of frequency)
1. Not thinking at all. Laughing, crying, aroused, and elated. OMG. Wow.
2. Eee, this is just what they need! This puts back together the heart that the first part of the story broke. I'm so happy now!
3. This is really well done. Wish I'd thought of it.
4a. What, all that buildup for two paragraphs that don't even tell me what specific act they're doing?
4b. What, two paragraphs of buildup and the entire rest of the story is finger-by-finger detail of sex between two people who are already aware they're in love?
5. Wait, you don't mean to tell me he's going to reward that sort of behavior? Oh, lord, he is.
6. [skim skim skim]
7. Nope. [back arrow]
8. Hm. Other people's arms must be a lot longer than mine are.
1. Not thinking at all. Laughing, crying, aroused, and elated. OMG. Wow.
2. Eee, this is just what they need! This puts back together the heart that the first part of the story broke. I'm so happy now!
3. This is really well done. Wish I'd thought of it.
4a. What, all that buildup for two paragraphs that don't even tell me what specific act they're doing?
4b. What, two paragraphs of buildup and the entire rest of the story is finger-by-finger detail of sex between two people who are already aware they're in love?
5. Wait, you don't mean to tell me he's going to reward that sort of behavior? Oh, lord, he is.
6. [skim skim skim]
7. Nope. [back arrow]
8. Hm. Other people's arms must be a lot longer than mine are.
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Date: 9/11/13 10:10 pm (UTC)