Nitpicking, again.

[resonant]

Word I don't ever want to read again in a story:

Obsidian.

Thank you, and goodnight.

Comments

[norah.livejournal.com]

I love the "my fandom has wanking budgies" icon.

How about the word "nave" instead of "naÏve"?

nave 1) n. The central part of a church, extending from the narthex to the chancel and flanked by aisles.
2)n. The hub of a wheel.

Even in otherwise well-written fic. Oy.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

"Ooh, baby!" he ejaculated, thrusting himself into the hot narthex before him.

[rliz.livejournal.com]

Actually, I think that happens often because the auto-archive softwares strip special characters from uploaded stories.